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Friday, 6 April 2018

Dinner’s adventure
One fantastic moning
I woke up I saw Dinner just stole a block
Of gooey chocolate.
I put my school t-shirt
And my school shorts  on and went on my way to school
At school i kept thinking about Dinner at writing evin at reading.
At home time my mum pick me up jumped in the sports car that dad buyed
for mom's birthday last week
When I went home mum made me do my chores
after that I snuggled with dinner at dinner time i gave dinner my dinner mum didn't notice


By dylan:)





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6 comments:

  1. Tekatiti6 April 2018 at 09:56

    he you are getting amazing at your work in reading time

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  2. Taylor6 April 2018 at 10:33

    dylan i love your story its very intresting and imagitive

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  3. Joshua6 April 2018 at 10:51

    This is very awesome story

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  4. Bronte6 April 2018 at 10:51

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  5. Bronte27 June 2018 at 10:58

    I love this so much dylan! but can you tell me what this is for please this is awesome but please pretty please tell me what this is for. this is awesome

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  6. dylan1 August 2018 at 10:45

    malakai:not bad i give 9000000000000000,00000000000 likes keep up up the good work dylan

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