I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Monday, 16 September 2019
Wednesday, 14 August 2019
persuasive writing
today we have been learning to do persuasive writing my topic was should kids get paid to go to school pls give me some feedback and in your comment write if you agree with me or do disagree
Thursday, 4 July 2019
my can he save her
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1K106IK7tP6pbl1reVSbMevem-Ym32Wn5v9s7GTw1IUM/edit
today and yesterday we did writing on can she save her story about spider man and my villain the Doctor Octopus and mj
and i want feed back on if its cool or interesting or even amazing like the amazing spider man thank you
today and yesterday we did writing on can she save her story about spider man and my villain the Doctor Octopus and mj
and i want feed back on if its cool or interesting or even amazing like the amazing spider man thank you
Friday, 15 September 2017
penguins
Penguins
Penguins live in the anuric
Ochin where there is ice.
Penguins need water and ice
To svivi in the wild
They eat fish.
Penguins are
Afraid of
Sealions.
Sealions
Eat
Penguins
And fish
Penguins do not
Have fers.
Penguins
Have
Black
And
white
borde.
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